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الأحد، 25 مارس 2012

Dreams Become True’’ By: Ahmed Hassanein‘‘














Dreams Become True



Ahmed Hassanein
 
He is in level five Nobles international school, Jeddah, K.S.A. He was born in Taif, K.S.A. (he is an Egyptian nationality) at May, 1998. His hobbies are writing stories, reading, and drawing. He likes to go clubs and play with his friends. This is his first story. He hopes this story amaze people.

                                                           Thank you






Building the Past

   In the early morning, there was a farmer called John. John is tall, has black, short hair, brown eyes, and pail skin. John is clever, fair, tidy, neat, and has many hobbies such as sports and drawing. John is humble and always takes notes. He is popular in the farm, he likes people, and people like him. His house is two floors. The first floor contains the kitchen and living room. The second floor contains the bathroom and the bedroom. John got a very big farm. He was 70KM from the city center to buy his food and seeds for the farm.
 
    One day, he thought, “I want to go to the city faster.” That day he dreamed that he is an inventor. He started designing a vehicle. He drew an attractive design. After he built it, he put the last touches on it, suddenly the vehicle broke down. He tried 5 times then gave up. It was midnight so he went to sleep.
 
      The next day, he tried to design another vehicle, but he couldn’t find an idea. Suddenly, an idea came to his mind. After he finished designing, he made some calls with a motorcycle company. After he closed the phone, he sat thinking because he didn’t want to fail.
 
       He didn’t know what to do the rest of the day, but he was nervous about failing. He thought that maybe a little sleep could make him better. When he went to bed, a nightmare came to him. He went and ate something then went to sleep.
  
John's Big Farm
     The next day, he called the motorcycle company to give him the motorcycle the next day. After that he went to the city. He brought his food, seeds and colored sprays. When he came back, he stored everything, except the sprays. He cleaned the barn and brought a cat to catch all the mice in the barn, to make the barn ready for an invention. John put the sprays in a secret place. It was ten o’clock so he went to sleep because he had a big day tomorrow.






Imaging the Past


  John dreamed, “That he became a small boy going to school. The school is big and made of four storeys. The school is like a mall. The school is called Noble’s school. The arts, science and math are his favorite subjects.

 
John's School
     He always tells his teachers that when he grows he wants to be an inventor. The teachers started to encourage him to be an inventor. He started to learn more and more to be an inventor.
    Five years later, he went to an engineering college. The college has parts, from these parts the boys and girls section. The college has huge storeys.
 
    He started to invent unusual things and he got an A+ on everything he made, even a small hand watch. He started to know how to make structures with iron or wood or even with clay. He knew how to measure, multiply, divide, add, and subtract by mental math. He also knew about kinds of metals and their boiling point. Each student in his class thought that he is a genius.
 
John's College
     One day, Peter, one of the students in college, came to John. So John said, “Hey, how are you man? Do you want anything?” Peter said, “I came with a time challenge: we’ll make a wooden clock and see who is faster!” John accepted the challenge, but under one condition if somebody loses the other can’t tease him.
Peter's Unfinished Clock
       The next day, they met and brought a clock for the time. Peter said, “3, 2, 1 and start!” The two students tried to race the time. After 45 minutes, John finished and said, “Stop, Stop, Stop!” Peter stopped and said, “What do you want John? I am almost finished.” John said, “I finished, but I didn’t forget our condition.” Peter smiled for fairness. Then, Peter went outside the room.
 
John's Finished Clock
       The next day, John took the clock to hang it in his house. When he was hanging it, suddenly he found the door knocking. He thought that little Jackson, his neighbor’s son, was playing with the door bell. He caught him and said, “Don’t play with the door bell again.” So Jackson said, “I wasn’t playing, I knew that you brought a new clock and I want to see the clock please?” John said, “How did you know that?” Jackson answered, “I saw you holding it into your house.”

 




The Heat of Challenge


  A month later, Peter and a teacher came to John for another challenge. Peter said, “Hello, here is a new challenger for you and the challenge is to make the faster and prettier car!” John accepted the challenge under the same condition. After college, they started buying the things they need for the car challenge.
The Teacher's Car
      The next day, John and the teacher started working on the cars. John started with the design: he put flames on the front, rear and on the two sides of the car. The teacher started with the motor: he went to the mechanic to make to make the car faster and faster.
 
     The next day, John went to a mechanic. John asked, “Could we make the engine faster and put the engine at the back?” The mechanic answered, “We will try.” John asked, “Should we take off the design?” The mechanic said, “No, only should make small circles for the extra engine.” “Yes!” said John.
 
John's Car
     An hour later, John wanted to test the car. They rented a race track. The car can run 100 KM in 30 minutes. The teacher ran with his car the 100 KM took 31 minutes. The two challengers went to the government to know which car is prettier. When they were with the government, the teacher told the story to the government. The government sat thinking and thinking.
 
     After a while, they decided to vote. One minute later, he teacher read the results, “The results are…1 for me…3 for John.” John jumped high. He called Peter to tell him the results. So peter said, “Maybe you won again, but I still have hope to win you.
 
     The journalists saw John going out of the government center building. So, they went in to ask the government about what happened. The government told the story to the journalists, and every one asks a question.
 
     The next day, John was reading the newspaper. When he finished the article about him the bell rang. When he opened the door John got scared. He saw a huge number of people that John almost fainted.




The Taste of Fame

  They were a huge number of car fans that liked the design and speed of his car. Suddenly, John shouted, “Stop! No questions till tomorrow and stand in a strait line next time, Okay?” Ten seconds later they disappeared. John called Peter about this. Ten minutes later Peter was in John’s home. They sat thinking what to do the rest of the day.
 
     The next day, John went to the park and made a stand. The people came after him. Cars were every where. After fifteen minutes you could not find a place to park.
 
     One hour later, John was that he is famous. Now he can be a millionaire and travel around the world to see ancient things. That he went to sleep early so he can get up early and ride his car in the city.
 
     The next day, he took a ride with Peter around the city to explore. Where ever John goes the crowd follows him. John goes to any place he wants. Peter made conservation with John about being famous. Peter started saying, “Is fame wonderful?” “Yes, but like anything it has negatives and positives.” “Which one is less?” “I don’t know because I have been famous for a short time.” “I wish I could try it.” “You will, Peter, you will.” said John.
      The next day, John went to the beach. He sat under the sun for sometime. Then, he went to splash in water with Peter. He had all the fun he wanted. John felt nervous for being famous, but Peter encouraged him.
     Suddenly, John remembered that he didn’t see his parents for about a year. When he was in his old home, his mother went so fast to hug him and said, “I miss you give me hug!” After that, John sat with his father talking about his invention. Then John let his father ride the car.
     The next day, John went back from vacation to college. He missed his teachers, challengers, challenges, quizzes and friends. Everyone brought gifts, but John brought the most expensive gifts.

     The next day, Peter asked John, “When is the next quiz? I want to challenge you an English one.” John said, “After one hour, so what is the challenge?” “I will give you six letters; you should find ten words from them: one of these words contains all the letters.” John accepted the challenge with same condition.
     After explanation, they met and went to an empty class. Peter wrote the letters on the board. John started saying words and words. After 30 minutes, John said about sixty words. Suddenly, John stopped and said, “Hey, I won, I won…!” Peter replied, “You are genius.”
     The next day, John got a certificate of being the college’s genius! John met the principle in front of all students! After that, the principle made an interview with John. John was very nervous then; he is famous in and out of the college.
       John thought about the journalists that chased him. Then he thought about people so he brought security, but he didn’t know what to do for journalists.
       The next day, it went smoothly until he was going out. The security was around him so there wasn’t a fight. The fans in a line they were happy, but still they wanted to ride the car. Everyone asked if he can ride, but John disagreed.





The Miss of Old Life


  A month later, John felt that there is something wrong. He told Peter about this so, Peter said, “You should g to a doctor.” John replied, “Which doctor? I am not sick.” Peter replied again, “Maybe you have some psychiatry problems?”
The Hospital John Was Treated In 
       The next day, John and Peter went all over the hospitals in the city. The last hospital was a little empty so they went in. The nurse said, “Are you famous…… John... John! The maker of the fastest car!” John said, “Yes, that is me standing in front of you. How do you know my name is?” “It is written on the paper you gave to me” The doctor answered… Then, John went outside of the hospital. When they were in John’s house Peter saw John thinking of something. After a while, John said, “Maybe the doctor is right, I miss my home in the town.” Peter replied, “Being famous can be bad sometimes, but you still enjoy your time aren’t you?” John answered, “No, no, no, no, not at all. I feel like I am in jail, but I liked being famous the first then I knew that it is bad.”

     The next day, they went to the college, any place in the college the oldest places, but still John didn’t get any better. Then they went to his school. John saw his old classes, old teachers, pictures, and the old trophies the school got. Even that John still didn’t get any better. They went back where they started (John’s house). They sat confused of what to do for John till the end of the day.

       The next day, John called Peter and said, “I think…”Peter interrupted, “I get scared when you say I think!” John replied, “Forget about it. Maybe I will get better if I visited my parents or at least just see the land I was born in.” Peter said, “Okay, let’s start tomorrow.” John replied, “What are you going to do the rest of the day?” Peter answered, “We will study for the quiz after tomorrow because we are busy tomorrow!”
       After two hours of studying, John said, “Wow, I like it. Let’s complete studying till night!” Peter whispered to himself, “I wish I didn’t give John this idea.” John said, “Did you say anything?” Peter said, “No” (in body language). When it was night Peter slept on the book at 12o’clock John couldn’t take it he wants to sleep. 3 seconds later, both were sleeping.
       The next day, John wakes up and wakens Peter to call John’s parents who are coming today. They ate breakfast in the car.
       They were talking about the childhood of John. Then John’s mom went to make cookies, mean time John showed the car. Showed one of the biggest fans of cars, his father. When they finished a ride in the car, John’s mother called for them to eat the cookies. John and Peter went home in the city at about midnight.





Falling in Nightmares


  A month later, John said hello to Peter, but Peter didn’t reply. John started asking other friends, but the only thing they do is push him. He started running out of the college, but his friends said, “Scary cat…!” John went to his house and saw the fastest car, but he couldn’t find the magazine. So he sat thinking why these things happened. Till it was 12o’clock so he went to sleep.
       The next day, Peter went to John and said, “You aren’t genius, you are a failure boy so bye, bye for ever!” John replied, “But you are my best friend.” Peter said, “Even though I am not your friend I repeat only a friend for genius O.K.?” John went crying about loosing a best friend easily.
       After one hour of crying, the bell rang for a new class. In the class, John tried to show Peter that he is a genius, but the teacher didn’t choose him. After the class, John asked the teacher about why she doesn’t choose him. Then the teacher said, “To detention.” So he went to the principal. He slammed the door open. Before he says any word the principal said, “Again, now you should go to detention for two weeks!” John replied, “But…but…”So the principal said, “No buts O.K.? So go out.” John replied, “Okay, look what you are doing.”
       After detention, John went to Peter’s house. Peter’s mom asked, “If you are John, go away because Peter doesn’t want to see you.” John went and called Peter. Peter said, “You don’t understand, I am not your friend, O.K., don’t you understand?” “No, No, I understand good… Bye… For …Ever.” John closed the phone sadly and went to sleep.
 
       The next day, John was putting in books in the locker. Peter came and hit him. John said, “What do you want you are not my friend, because you say you aren’t my friend so g…o…o…d bye.” John went to the nearest teacher and told him the story, she said, “Better, or you want one of the best to be punished?” John answered, “No thanks.”
 
       After Chemistry class, Peter came to John and gave him something and said, “Add on it water.” John added water. After 10 seconds, the chemical exploded, but John hid under the desk so it exploded on Peter. Peter got mad so he told the teacher and John was in detention for the third week!
       After school, John went home walking alone. Suddenly, he got hit. John looked it was Peter and a group of bullies. Peter commanded them saying, “Okay, boys you know what to do”. The bullies came to him so John went under them and ran a way. Peter shouted, “Get him, run, run!” John ran till his house and locked the door. Then the bullies left him and went.
 
       The next day, he saw the bullies running after him. So, he ran to the police. The police saw the bullies running after John, but he left them and didn’t do anything. Suddenly,    he found a wall blocking the way. So he climbed and ran away.
 
 
       Next day he went by his car but Peter was absent so John called him. Peter closed the phone. John got sad, but he went to sleep.”





Real Live is Better than Dreams 

  Suddenly, John woke up on a cow’s sound. He washed his face, wore new cloth. He mad ea healthy breakfast, because he is going to work in the farm. John was sad, because he woke up from a good dream at first, but he is happy, because he woke up from a nightmare. John sat on the table and ate his breakfast. After that, he went out. So, he found workers taking stones from a near quarry. John found trucks, cement makers, workers, and engineers. John was happy because maybe an engineer will live next to him, but he is worried if a farmer is going to be next to him.

       A couple of weeks later, the house finished and is ready to be lived in. One by one the workers started to go to the city center till there wasn’t anybody near the house.

       The next day, the owner came with a truck full of cartoons and bags. The owner designed the house for a party. He invited everybody he knows for a party in the next day.
 
 
Joe's House
       The next day, John was eating breakfast he heard the bell ringing so he opened the door, it was his neighbor. The neighbor said, “Hello, I am your new neighbor. My name is Joe, what is yours?” John smiled and said, “My name is John come on in.” Joe replied, “No, thanks I just wanted to invite you to my party tonight, good bye see you tonight.”

 
       That night, John went to Joe’s party. He wore cool cloth. He found everybody there. John had a nice time in the party. The party early, because everybody had work in the morning.
 
 
       The next day, John was working in the farm to take the food in the barn waiting for fall to come. When John was putting food in barrels, Joe saw John and asked him, “Could I come to your house tonight so we talk together?” John asked, “Why?!” Joe answered, “Because I want to know more about you.”
      
    That night, Joe went to John’s house. They discussed about John. Joe stared because loneliness makes a strong man like John.




Dreams Become True
  
  The next day, Joe went to bring John to his home. When they discussed about work Joe said that he is an engineer. When he said like this, John told him everything. Joe said, “So you want something new, so let’s start tomorrow!”
 
 
 
The next day, they went to the city to bring a motor. They went around stores they found a store had an offer called, “Buy a motor and get a free structure as you want.” They went inside.

After several hours, they went outside with a good motor and a well designed structure for the motorcycle.

The next day, was hard to find good wheels. The asked somebody to tell them the place. They bought the tires for half each. It was hard to believe, but they collected everything.

The next day, they were very confused there was no book for help. So they left it.
The next day, John and Joe went all over libraries, but they didn’t find the right book till the last library till they found the right book.

 
The next day, they started building the motorcycle it was hard, but fun. They started to measure the things together (putting things together to see if they fit).

 
The next day they finished the motorcycle, but they didn’t know how to make it work. So they thought that it needs electrical current. They tried everything, but it didn’t work, till they found the keys next to the engine. It was midnight so they went to sleep.

 
The next day, they took the keys and looked for the hole of the key. When they finished, John trained on the motorcycle. Meanwhile, Joe thought, “Let’s make a party because we have a new motorcycle.”



The Event’s Party


That night, each of them called his friends for a party next night. Everybody wondered why this party is made while John was very proud of himself.

The next day, John cleaned his house and put everything in place. Joe came with sprays and asked John, “Could we make a picture of flame on the motorcycle?” “Yes, it will be wonderful!”

 
That night, everybody came and they made a loud sound and John let them ride the motorcycle. It was the best party John ever saw.
After the party, John went to Joe and told him, "It was the best party, but real life could be better than dreams!!”




The Party That Was Held









الأربعاء، 21 مارس 2012

The Mother's Day" By: Aayah M. Hassanein"





The Mother’s Day

Written by: Aayah M. Hassanein
Grade      :  6




    Kind, charming, exquisite, and compassionate. These traits describe one person; the mother. The mother is like a rose. Its colors and sweet fragrance change the person’s mood and feelings just like she does. She cares about the happiness of the people around her. Mothers spend years caring for and looking after their children, loving them and embedding them with manners, raising them to be the finest of all people.

    On Mother’s Day, I’d say to my mother, “Mommy, I love you, and I thank God for having such a great mother like you!” 





My Mommy" By: Aayah M. Hassanein"







My Mommy

Written by: Aayah M. Hassanein
Grade       : 6       


One day I was alone
All by my own
Tears fell from my eyes
And my feelings said goodbyes
All my friends left except
One person who always kept
Suffering from me
With her I grow and be
I love her all my life
Like a husband to his wife
She kept her life to me
So I could always be
Just for her
Even if I traveled everywhere
From east to west, I won’t find
From north to south, a person so kind
To care just for me
And stay around me to be
All around
While I travel this world round
************************
As I traveled all around
I never found
That shows how much I love you
And that is absolutely true
I always love you
And I know it’s from you too
That’s my mother
And won’t go much further




الاثنين، 19 مارس 2012

The Rainy Day’’ Story By: Ahmed Hassanein‘‘




The Rainy Day


By       : Ahmed Hassanein 
Grade : 8


     It was a cold cloudy after noon. I was getting ready for the school in the latter week of the vacation. All of us are preparing our sumptuous bedrooms, while the days of playing and fun have been finishing.
     
     When it came exactly six o'clock, I wore my sports clothes and went down for a match in the our compound court. We warmed up and started playing the match. We played till we are tired and we needed something cold to drink. So I and some of my friends are going to accommodate the others and bring the cold drinks. We collected money and went to market.

   After we went inside the market, the sky started raining. I looked to my friends and smiled they understood me and smiled back. Then I bought some water balloons and filled them with water. When I came back I have found out that my friends have filled theirs. So we went to a high land above the court and started throwing water bombs at the ones that were left in the court talking and laughing. Then, they started running and went inside a building and sat there for a couple of minutes. Finally they came out carrying water balloons and they started a water fight. After the last balloon have popped we went back home happy and our cloths are wet as if we jumped with our cloths on in a swimming pool.

   Everybody returned to his home delighted and took a shower. After that we started calling each other. I slept with good mood that I slept and dreamed good dreams. So is there anything more fun than fun with friends.



الاثنين، 12 مارس 2012

An Opinion Essay’’ By: Ahmed Hassanein‘‘





Does Television destroy Communication?


By: Ahmed Hassanein                Grade: 8



      Unfortunately, some people agree on that television has destroyed communication between friends and family. I strongly disagree that television has destroyed communication between people.

     Firstly, the television has transported much news into the watcher's mind in many fields such as politics, sports.... Because of the transfer of these ideas and events it opened more space to give your ideas about every event and idea.

     Secondly, television has entertained many families and people instead of just facing the inner curmudgeon inside them with anger. For example, if somebody made you angry, you could cool down in front of the screen then face the other people with happiness.

     However, you could argue by saying that channels are a gossip and could grapple with each other causing many rumors and crisis between people.

      Television is an important thing in life. It doesn't destroy communication. In fact it opens more space to give more ideas about events and ideas.




الأحد، 11 مارس 2012

’’ خيانة الأمانة ‘‘ قصة للأطفال من تأليف : آية محمد حسنين




  خيانة الأمانة

تأليف :  آية محمد حسنين
الصف : السادس

     
 كان يا ما كان في قديم الزمان كان هناك أخوان، اسمهما وليد و سامر . كان وليد وسامر في العطلة الصيفية يتمّتعان بالفرح و المرح. في يوم من أيّام العطلة قرر سامر أن يدعوا صديقه زيد إلى بيته فوافق زيد.
     
     في اليوم المحّدد ،جاء زيد إلى بيت سامر و معه لعبتين ليلعب بهما مع سامر. أمضى سامر و زيد أوقات ٍ جميلةً و مسليةً حتى جاء موعد رجوع زيد إلى منزله. تواعدا أن يحضر زيد إلى بيت سامر مرّة آخرى في الأسبوع القادم.

    بعدما مضى زيد لاحظ سامر أن زيد قد نسي لعبة من ألعابه في بيته.اخذ اللّعبة و خبأها في مكتبه و قرّر ان يحتفظ بها و ألّا يعطيها إلى زيد في المرة القادمة.

    حين حضر زيد إلى منزل سامر في المرّة التالية، سأل زيد سامر عن لعبته التى نسيها، فردّ سامر قائلا: عن أي لعبة تتحدث؟ أجاب زيد: أتحدّث عن اللّعبة الّتى أحضرتها معي المرة السابقة.
    - هل أنت متأكّد من أنّك لم تأخذها معك ؟ 
    - نعم ، أنا متأكّد من أنّي لم آخذها ، ألم تراها ياسامر؟!
    - لا لم أرها.

    رحل زيد وهو غاضب ٌ. عند رحيل زيد لاحظ وليد ابتسامة سامر على انتصاره. ذهب وليد إلى سامر و قال له : مابك يا سامر لماذا هذه الإبتسامة ، أه من الواضح أنّك خبّأت اللّعبة . أتكذب على زيد؟! أجاب سامر : لم أكذب. و من قال لك أنّي أكذب؟
   - ها أنت تكذب الآن مجدّدا ، لماذا لم تعطِ زيد لعبته ؟
   - لأنّني أحبّها وأريد أن أحتفظ بها 
   - وهل قلت له ذلك؟
   - لا
   - لماذا؟
   - لإنّه لن يوافق
   - وهل تعلم لماذا لن يوافق؟
   - لأنّها لعبته ومن المؤكّد أنّه يحبّها 
سأل وليد: وأنت إن فقدت لعبتك هل ستحزن أم لا؟
   - طبعاً سوف أحزن
   أليس زيد مثلك فيجب أن تحبّ له ما تحبّ لنفسك كما قال الرسول صلى الله عليه وسلم:(( لا يؤمن أحدكم حتّى يحبّ لأخيه ما يحبّ لنفسه))
   - نعم ولكنّي  أحبّها ولا أريد تركها
   - نعم ولكنّك بذلك العمل تكذب وتخون الأمانة ولا يجوز ذلك فإن ذلك من علامات النّفاق الثلاث كما أخبرنا رسولنا الصّادق الأمين صلى الله عليه وسلم :((علامات المنافق ثلاث : إذ حدث كذب وإذا وعد أخلف وإذا اؤتمن خان))
   - ولكنّي أحبّها ولكن سأسمع كلام الرّسول وأعطي زيد لعبته. ولكن كيف أشرح له سبب عدم إعطائه اللّعبة في المرّة السّابقة؟
   - اعتذر له وقل له أنّك لم تقصد ألّا تعطيه إيّاها ولكنّك أردت  الاحتفاظ بها لأنّك تحبّها
      أتمّ سامر الشّيء الّذي اتّفق عليه مع وليد وذهب إلى بيت زيد ليعطيه اللّعبة ويعتذر له. قَبِل زيد اعتذار سامر وفرح زيد جداً لأنّه استرجع لعبته واستعادَ صديقه سامر.
     بعد عدة أيّام، كانت العطلة قد انتهت. تعلم سامر في هذه العطلة أنّ الكذب وخيانة الأمانة علامتان من علامات المنافق، وأنّه يجب على المؤمن أنّ يحبّ لأخيه ما يحبّ لنفسه.










 

The Island’’ Poem by : Ahmed Hassanein‘‘





The Island


By: Ahmed Hassanein                               Gr: 8



Once upon a time
Somebody did a crime.
Thrown on an island
Far from land.
He was very proud
That he knew magic
That made his story a tragic
After being thrown on an island
Far from land.

***************

He controlled animals
The one who fly
All over the sky
And the ones who swim in the dark
Especially the white shark .
This is how it started
Being thrown on an island
Far from land.

***************

One winter cold winds came
With rains on the way
Making the sea feel gay
The sea rise
In a way of wise
As the one was sleeping
Not feeling
And this is how it ended
Being thrown on an island
Far from land.

***************

His grave is in the sea.
Nobody felt even a pea.
Not even the winds.
Neither the rains
That what happened
To the one thrown on an island
Far from land.